Again, beautifully rendered! You are very talented. The triangular piece above the character's head is very bothersome. It makes it look as though he is wearing a graduation cap. Also the rays of light emitting from the candles don't appear to be really coming from the flames themselves. Are those mirrors behhind the candles, or pictures? If they are mirrors, it would be nice to see the rays of light being bounced from them rather than from some point behind both the candles and the pictures.

The background is actually based on the background used in the anime series, and I'm trying to figure out how to adapt the triangular pieces onto this picture (maybe they stand out too much).

The "mirrors" are supposed to be the glass of picture frames (maybe they are too reflective of light).

Thanks for the thorough comment.

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Oh no problem. You have some beautiful work.

Very well lightened character! But his arms looks like too long, and his hands too strange.
The background lighting doesn't fit with the suggested by the magical lighting, that looks great!

A nice piece, in the overall

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As promised a comment for a comment, ok I like the whole light thing, but the upper left has these black shapes that divert my attention from the light.

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In this one again your cel shading is perfect & the face & hair look very professional, but I'm not liking the pose..he looks very static, like a doll with not enough joints ^^ It's mainly the arms & the back, they're not very human. & I don't think I understand what the black shapes are
I like the light though, nice & soft Maybe if you had the light beams centered on the individual flames rather than in the center of he candles it would look more like the light was coming from the flame itself. With the photo frames, maybe you could draw in rough images under the shine of the glass so they'd look less like mirrors
Nice work again though, I'm jealous of your cel shading skills!

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this is also my fav haha! i love this one! great job on the color!!!

very kool

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I sometimes have trouble with anime coloring, but this is really nice! I especially like his hair. And that lighting is impossibly clean... I love it! Nice touch!! I love all the angles in the corner too. That's just eye candy!